tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post3586184747767895140..comments2024-03-07T12:44:05.519-05:00Comments on Diane Burton: #WeWriWa ~ THE SPY: Genna Arrives in Eleganza #sfrDiane Burtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-71806669354070004912019-11-08T17:28:28.785-05:002019-11-08T17:28:28.785-05:00Wow, I could almost taste that. Definitely not a p...Wow, I could almost taste that. Definitely not a pleasant time for her.Aldrea Alienhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05652344290376563676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-40987225033175069402019-11-04T08:01:57.815-05:002019-11-04T08:01:57.815-05:00Good point, Linda. I hadn't thought of her bei...Good point, Linda. I hadn't thought of her being extra-sensitive to smell, but your comment gave me an idea. Thanks.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-67303916718855057402019-11-04T08:00:43.867-05:002019-11-04T08:00:43.867-05:00LOL Me, too, Hywela.LOL Me, too, Hywela.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-23318392897555425572019-11-04T08:00:22.752-05:002019-11-04T08:00:22.752-05:00Thank, Aurora. High compliment coming from you who...Thank, Aurora. High compliment coming from you who does world-building so well.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-31719665377519803752019-11-04T07:59:45.444-05:002019-11-04T07:59:45.444-05:00Thanks for that observation, Veronica. I've sa...Thanks for that observation, Veronica. I've sat near people who wore way too much perfume or (men) cologne. I channeled that experience. :)Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-15286457463468170772019-11-04T00:27:09.484-05:002019-11-04T00:27:09.484-05:00Hum, is she really sensitive to smell or is it rea...Hum, is she really sensitive to smell or is it really this bad. I'm not a fan of crowded place either, hopefully she won't stay there too long. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-21163035952364766622019-11-03T17:47:50.302-05:002019-11-03T17:47:50.302-05:00Very powerful use of smell to set the scene -sucke...Very powerful use of smell to set the scene -sucked me into the story immediately, but I think I'd prefer to be out and far away from those smells! :)Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-78237610511136776632019-11-03T11:03:48.373-05:002019-11-03T11:03:48.373-05:00I agree with her about too many scents being overp...I agree with her about too many scents being overpowering. Nice worldbuilding in passing!Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-29932628807858795532019-11-03T10:20:49.468-05:002019-11-03T10:20:49.468-05:00I guess some things will never change, such as peo...I guess some things will never change, such as people wearing too much perfume and giving other people migraines! Enjoyed the slice of life look at this character (not that she has a migraine LOL), great snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-12378734464839816852019-11-03T08:44:03.054-05:002019-11-03T08:44:03.054-05:00Thanks, Ed.Thanks, Ed.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-5422698159910570492019-11-03T08:43:48.748-05:002019-11-03T08:43:48.748-05:00Good point, Teresa.Good point, Teresa.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-62655321320602637842019-11-03T08:43:28.103-05:002019-11-03T08:43:28.103-05:00Thanks, Charmaine.Thanks, Charmaine.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-69177311048621251182019-11-03T08:43:09.479-05:002019-11-03T08:43:09.479-05:00Thanks so much, Jess. :)Thanks so much, Jess. :)Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-82202900458907572452019-11-03T01:22:19.127-05:002019-11-03T01:22:19.127-05:00I love how you used a bunch of made-up words yet m...I love how you used a bunch of made-up words yet managed to convey a very concrete sense of smell.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-56465529374896756822019-11-02T23:39:13.573-04:002019-11-02T23:39:13.573-04:00Good use of the senses, Diane. I'm wondering i...Good use of the senses, Diane. I'm wondering if it stinks that way to everyone, or if she's especially sensitive to smells. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-61111793248986723612019-11-02T21:20:35.046-04:002019-11-02T21:20:35.046-04:00Delightful with all the smells etc. You captured t...Delightful with all the smells etc. You captured the uh fragrance.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-60273872015926698652019-11-02T20:42:31.499-04:002019-11-02T20:42:31.499-04:00Oh my gosh, you made my eyes water with your descr...Oh my gosh, you made my eyes water with your description of the smell of that place. Well written!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com