tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post448506446734114425..comments2024-03-07T12:44:05.519-05:00Comments on Diane Burton: #WeWriWa - THE PROTECTOR: Will They Get The Kids Out In Time? #sfrDiane Burtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-88546187275595598112017-08-16T08:33:27.653-04:002017-08-16T08:33:27.653-04:00That's good, Teresa. Coming up with expletives...That's good, Teresa. Coming up with expletives is a challenge.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-23156886183174615102017-08-16T08:32:30.151-04:002017-08-16T08:32:30.151-04:00Thanks, Julie.Thanks, Julie.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-40129474043265138272017-08-15T23:26:38.754-04:002017-08-15T23:26:38.754-04:00"By the Matriarch..." I like it! Alien ..."By the Matriarch..." I like it! Alien to my "ears" but sounds human enough to draw emotion. :-)<br /><br />Teresa (Cypher) :-)<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-84938960941627423762017-08-14T10:37:41.107-04:002017-08-14T10:37:41.107-04:00Oy, sounds like very unpleasant conditions. Great ...Oy, sounds like very unpleasant conditions. Great descriptions, though! Julie Evelyn Joycenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-3640817801640131432017-08-14T09:36:24.543-04:002017-08-14T09:36:24.543-04:00Oh, I hope she can. It sounds terrible.Oh, I hope she can. It sounds terrible.Kimberly Gouldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623715828708451552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-61933764213509557232017-08-14T08:32:36.639-04:002017-08-14T08:32:36.639-04:00Thanks, Nancy.Thanks, Nancy.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-25162659320214716992017-08-14T08:32:15.437-04:002017-08-14T08:32:15.437-04:00Thanks, Karen. I tried to imagine the conditions i...Thanks, Karen. I tried to imagine the conditions in ships' holds when slaves were taken. Even in trucks carrying illegal immigrants.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-6204837596716041992017-08-14T08:30:56.026-04:002017-08-14T08:30:56.026-04:00Exactly. He's no dummy. ;)Exactly. He's no dummy. ;)Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-34350725688017853322017-08-14T08:30:33.451-04:002017-08-14T08:30:33.451-04:00Thanks, Veronica.Thanks, Veronica.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-41075850979949691382017-08-14T08:30:12.909-04:002017-08-14T08:30:12.909-04:00Thanks, Elaine.Thanks, Elaine.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-36546406613385508762017-08-14T06:50:42.778-04:002017-08-14T06:50:42.778-04:00Love the way the tension and urgency is increasing...Love the way the tension and urgency is increasing. Great job, Di!!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-82987155956881810542017-08-14T00:43:20.127-04:002017-08-14T00:43:20.127-04:00I'm hoping he's going to help her. Great i...I'm hoping he's going to help her. Great imagery of how the kids had to live in the hold. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-1443530977696742712017-08-13T23:37:08.422-04:002017-08-13T23:37:08.422-04:00I love how quickly he adapts to the situation, onc...I love how quickly he adapts to the situation, once he knows what's going on. No time wasting for him!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-47053137147616081132017-08-13T23:17:20.740-04:002017-08-13T23:17:20.740-04:00More stark reality going on here. I hope he helps ...More stark reality going on here. I hope he helps her! Excellent, tense excerpt...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-6061270733889952182017-08-13T23:00:14.094-04:002017-08-13T23:00:14.094-04:00Now I'm curious if he's going to be a hero...Now I'm curious if he's going to be a hero or just a passing guy. Nice excerpt.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-9412089205763153002017-08-13T22:05:48.871-04:002017-08-13T22:05:48.871-04:00Me, too.Me, too.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-88910779630017030282017-08-13T21:44:06.940-04:002017-08-13T21:44:06.940-04:00The concept of the "smell" just about ma...The concept of the "smell" just about made me gag.<br />Tweeted.Daryl Devoréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00941826725131248565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-52635347363124010892017-08-13T17:35:13.133-04:002017-08-13T17:35:13.133-04:00Like Ed said, these hero-type guys don't liste...Like Ed said, these hero-type guys don't listen. ;)Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-82853781373515162572017-08-13T17:34:35.606-04:002017-08-13T17:34:35.606-04:00LOL, Sue. Real pains in the rear.LOL, Sue. Real pains in the rear.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-88982370862637031612017-08-13T17:34:08.110-04:002017-08-13T17:34:08.110-04:00She'd be pretty rude if she didn't accept ...She'd be pretty rude if she didn't accept it.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-19129158969318380412017-08-13T17:33:37.914-04:002017-08-13T17:33:37.914-04:00Oh, yeah--in more ways than she ever imagines.Oh, yeah--in more ways than she ever imagines.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-81305092397121790292017-08-13T17:33:10.108-04:002017-08-13T17:33:10.108-04:00LOL Thanks, Aurora.LOL Thanks, Aurora.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-28870402610446279172017-08-13T17:32:52.987-04:002017-08-13T17:32:52.987-04:00Thank you so much, Charmaine.Thank you so much, Charmaine.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-78826281021693002792017-08-13T17:21:52.644-04:002017-08-13T17:21:52.644-04:00LOL, Ed. Infuriating.LOL, Ed. Infuriating.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-55487414709408418822017-08-13T17:21:21.596-04:002017-08-13T17:21:21.596-04:00She doesn't recognize him at all. She should ....She doesn't recognize him at all. She should . . . and will soon.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.com