tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post4478034735792336936..comments2024-03-07T12:44:05.519-05:00Comments on Diane Burton: #WeWriWa ~ THE PILOT: Oh, Mama!Diane Burtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-79177088642157334682019-10-07T20:52:30.727-04:002019-10-07T20:52:30.727-04:00Thanks so much, Karen.Thanks so much, Karen.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-50911699039218441212019-10-07T18:50:38.798-04:002019-10-07T18:50:38.798-04:00Oh Mama- made me chuckle when I read that. Great i...Oh Mama- made me chuckle when I read that. Great imagery. Great snippet!Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-56338560151257951182019-10-06T22:40:32.301-04:002019-10-06T22:40:32.301-04:00Thanks, Hywela.Thanks, Hywela.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-18245781022026723792019-10-06T22:40:18.176-04:002019-10-06T22:40:18.176-04:00Oh, she has, Ed. And she wants to party!Oh, she has, Ed. And she wants to party!Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-30457495544223849562019-10-06T22:39:52.587-04:002019-10-06T22:39:52.587-04:00LOL Glad you caught that.LOL Glad you caught that.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-52245083914658494262019-10-06T22:39:30.181-04:002019-10-06T22:39:30.181-04:00I never made that connection, Jenna. LOL Amazing w...I never made that connection, Jenna. LOL Amazing what the subconscious does.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-30683010944887202422019-10-06T22:38:36.551-04:002019-10-06T22:38:36.551-04:00Thanks so much, Veronica. High praise coming from ...Thanks so much, Veronica. High praise coming from you.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-71049806322617320612019-10-06T22:38:08.133-04:002019-10-06T22:38:08.133-04:00Thanks, Natalie.Thanks, Natalie.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-32139118728875991132019-10-06T22:37:52.955-04:002019-10-06T22:37:52.955-04:00Oh, yeah. Cute as it is!Oh, yeah. Cute as it is!Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-53748542544976884442019-10-06T18:53:27.029-04:002019-10-06T18:53:27.029-04:00Such a visual scene - really enjoyed it!Such a visual scene - really enjoyed it!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-35593290070962352672019-10-06T16:55:35.356-04:002019-10-06T16:55:35.356-04:00I'm beginning to think she's been in space...I'm beginning to think she's been in space too long.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-14030034595328705092019-10-06T16:31:35.981-04:002019-10-06T16:31:35.981-04:00Hmmm, owner of a great body and an interest in the...Hmmm, owner of a great body and an interest in the equivalent of 'racing cars', someone to cultivate 🤗lostinimaginaryworlds.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765118845864442948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-76389272212681703112019-10-06T16:13:06.694-04:002019-10-06T16:13:06.694-04:00Oh, Mama is right from your description of him. LO...Oh, Mama is right from your description of him. LOL An already steamy description of the planet compounded by the hot description of him--great snippet!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-89779865178901498172019-10-06T15:40:34.160-04:002019-10-06T15:40:34.160-04:00I liked the way you worked all the senses into the...I liked the way you worked all the senses into the description of the planet and the repair shop. And then you added in the sense of sight and her reaction to the guy LOL. Great snippet all the way around.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-79616501054811810842019-10-06T12:40:40.099-04:002019-10-06T12:40:40.099-04:00Great scene. I especially liked it when she saw th...Great scene. I especially liked it when she saw that guy. Great getting into what she saw and thought.Natalie Aguirrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03756087804171246660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-47251014601145709972019-10-06T11:34:19.283-04:002019-10-06T11:34:19.283-04:00I have a bad feeling about that butt. LOL!I have a bad feeling about that butt. LOL!Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-4567269710335168202019-10-06T10:33:27.100-04:002019-10-06T10:33:27.100-04:00Thanks, Teresa. I'm glad to hear that.Thanks, Teresa. I'm glad to hear that.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-3851493537754837872019-10-06T10:32:51.659-04:002019-10-06T10:32:51.659-04:00Thanks, Charmaine.Thanks, Charmaine.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-21624084086213974442019-10-06T10:32:33.570-04:002019-10-06T10:32:33.570-04:00Such opposites. They do have to change.Such opposites. They do have to change.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-38558912407578386452019-10-06T10:31:56.744-04:002019-10-06T10:31:56.744-04:00LOL Probably not.LOL Probably not.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-33409066262223546282019-10-06T10:22:14.985-04:002019-10-06T10:22:14.985-04:00Trvarr's sin is pride. He's so bullheaded ...Trvarr's sin is pride. He's so bullheaded in the beginning. How could he believe she really didn't think he was a pirate if he listened to what she just said? lol <br /><br />Love the descriptions in this scene. ALl hot, sweaty, heavy. You pull the reader in.Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-47586814017692333162019-10-06T10:17:28.657-04:002019-10-06T10:17:28.657-04:00I wish I was right there. Diane, you pictured a pe...I wish I was right there. Diane, you pictured a perfect scene.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-39266803696321461822019-10-06T09:26:04.827-04:002019-10-06T09:26:04.827-04:00The ship and the pilot sound like a great pair! The ship and the pilot sound like a great pair! Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4388011374794192178.post-36407400114994699872019-10-06T09:07:30.104-04:002019-10-06T09:07:30.104-04:00He might not be pleased by her interest if he is w...He might not be pleased by her interest if he is who I suspect.Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.com