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I'm sharing snippets from The Spy: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 4th book in my series featuring strong women on the frontier of space.
Because this is a work in progress, suggestions are greatly appreciated. Genna is in Commission Vorinda's office. This snippet starts after d'Sernin's handler leaves.
“Smarmy
son of a bitch—defiant, too,” Vorinda strode to the floor-to-ceiling window,
his hands clasped behind his back, “Maybe I’ll reassign him to a remote colony,
like Marin 5.”
The
prison colony? Yikes.
“He
was technically correct about d’Sernin.”
“Technically,
sir?”
Vorinda’s
lip curled in a half smile, “Quin was a wild kid, followed his no-good father
from town to town running confidence games. It’s true he spent two years in a
Menacan prison—also true that he was locked up a second time, but that was part
of his cover.”
Genna’s
ears perked up, “His cover?”
“Quin
needed a focus, a way to channel his energy. At that time, Hallart was just
starting out, both Quin and I recognized he would be a force beyond anything
we’d known.”
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There are so many pieces of this story at play here. So much backstory to learn before Genna starts the mission. I wonder if she'll ever be truly ready.
ReplyDeleteProbably not. lol
DeleteThere is so much going on here. Wonderful snippet, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you, dear Charmaine.
DeleteSince this is a WIP, I'll mention that I didn't realize right away who the speaker was in the line "He was technically correct about d’Sernin."
ReplyDeleteGood point, Ed. Thanks.
DeleteAh, now we get the real story. I can't wait to meet this character.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alexis.
DeleteYes. This begins to make sense.
ReplyDeleteThanks.
DeleteThis snippet makes the reader want to know more about Quin - and meet him!
ReplyDeleteSince I'm dribbling out 10 sentences at a time, the chapter is going so slowly.
DeleteStill a lot to piece together, however, I believe it's clearer when reading chapter by chapter and not week to week. :) Still intriguing, though! Very cloak and dagger!
ReplyDeleteYou are so right, Jenna. Thanks.
DeleteQuin has quite a background. Going to be hard for her to sort out what's true about him and what to trust...or not. Enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteExactly. Who does she believe/trust?
DeleteWow, that's quite the backstory. Intrigued by these characters and anxious to learn more. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julie.
DeleteLoved the body language mixed with dialogue. Do you also write screenplays?
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling,
Yawatta
My WIPs usually look like screenplays--dialogue and actions. I need to layer in setting and emotions. Thanks, Yawatta.
DeleteQuin sounds intriguing.
ReplyDeleteSo Quin is a wild card. Never know how he is going to react. "channel his energy." can be ominous.
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