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Saturday, March 26, 2022

#WeWriWa ~ The Case of the Wrecked Wedding: All Your Fault

 


Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, where writers share snippets from their work-in-progress or new release. Sorry to have been AWOL for a few weekends. 

I'm sharing snippets from the 4th Alex O'Hara cozy mystery, The Case of the Wedding Wrecker. This follows immediately after the last snippet. Alex and her dad followed police deputy Dawson (aka Deputy Dawg, Alex's nemesis since 2nd grade) who interrupted the wedding ceremony by arresting Nick for the murder of Mike Amerson, Todd's stepfather. Todd is holding the door at the police station for Alex and her dad.

BTW, since this is a work in progress, suggestions are always welcome.

Snippet:  

I’d looped the train over my arm. As soon as I had a second, I was unhooking it—or whatever to free me from tripping over the damn thing. As soon as we entered the station, Sharon Amerson, Todd’s mother, who had been sitting on a bench, ran up to him.

“He’s gone,” she sobbed. The small woman flung herself into his arms. “Your father is dead.”

Todd stiffened before holding her in an awkward embrace. “My father died seven years ago, Mom. Mike isn’t . . . wasn’t my father.”


And a little more:   

She cried even harder before looking up at her son. She held his shoulders. “Oh, my boy. You are so handsome. Where . . . Why are you all dressed up?”

“Mo-om, I told you about the wedding. You were invited. Mr. Nick and Miss Alex—”

“You!” Sharon pointed at me. “It’s all your fault. If you hadn’t interfered, Mike would still be alive.”

When she charged at me, Deputy Jenny Sampson burst around the locked barrier into the lobby. Since Rose was at the church, Jenny manned—womanned?—the dispatch desk. Todd grabbed his mother’s arms and held her back.

“Mom, what are you doing?”

“They killed your father. The two of them.” She sobbed and fell into her son’s arms.


Be sure to check out the other WeWriWa authors. Stay safe and have a great week.



23 comments:

  1. Well, she can accuse all she wants, but she's wrong. And she'd better have proof or I'm going to recommend that Alex sue her. :-)

    Poor Alex. Truly a wrecked wedding day!

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  2. I hope Dawson had more proof than this woman's ramblings before arresting Nick! Gosh, this seems like such a mess! But, great writing!

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  3. She seems to be rambling in her grief. How awful the wedding is ruined.

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    1. Rambling is right. But her son knows the truth--Nick couldn't be the killer.

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  4. The plot thickens! This surely isn't the way one's wedding day ought to be going. Tweeted.

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  5. A dramatic scene! And she's still wearing the dress.

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    1. Including the train and veil. She looks a wreck.

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  6. Oh my, drama and more tension! Really a great excerpt and makes me NEED to know more.

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  7. And, as they say, the plot thickens! So this woman thinks they were both in on it? Keep ramping up that tension, Diane! Great snippet! Tweeted.

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  8. wommaned? - LOL

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    Sorry I'm so late - busy busy day.

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  9. wommanned - ha, ha, love it. Sounds like quite the mess going on. I feel really bad for the bride. I hope she gets a wedding redo.

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  11. It seems you're writing up that proverbial storm, Diane. Congratulations. Loved the snippets you shared.

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