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I'm sharing a new project, a romance with a little mystery. It's a work in progress, so I'm open to suggestions. This snippet occurs after last week's. Still, in the first chapter. Please excuse the rogue commas.
“Why are you upset about
that box?”
Mother waved the
soggy tissue and stood. “Not important, time to get back to work. You can wrap the
garland around the banister—you always do such a nice job.”
Before Abby could
pursue the issue of tears, Mother bustled out to the kitchen. “Don’t wind that
garland too tight.”
When Abby realized
what her mother had done, she thunked her forehead. By focusing on the garland, she’d gotten Abby off the
topic of the box in the dining room. As she wound the silk strands around the
banister and rail, she wondered what could
possibly be in that box to make Mother cry?
The blurb is also a work-in-progress.
From Jailbirds to Wedding Bells blurb:
Abby Ten Eyck hates change. Her mother is arrested, with an unknown man, and she’s selling the family home—Abby’s worst nightmare. For fifteen years since her divorce, she’s kept men at bay. A handsome newcomer revives her dormant feelings, until she discovers his dad is dating her mother. How much change can she take?
Sam Watson embraces the transition from frenetic Wall Street to a small Michigan resort town. His health is worth moving close to his dad who seems over the moon in love. But it’s the daughter who fascinates Sam. Abby Ten Eyck reminds him of his driven self. He has to help her slow down before she burns out. Like he did.
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Have a great Thanksgiving. I won't post next Sunday. See you in 2 weeks.
Hmm. So what is the mystery about the box?
ReplyDeleteA mystery. LOL
DeleteNice deflection by Mom! But I have a feeling Abby isn’t going to let this go.
ReplyDeleteNope.
DeleteTypical of a mom keeping things to herself. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteYeah. We do things like that, don't we?
DeleteI have a feeling the mother is very good at use misdirection to steer conversations away from what she doesn't want to reveal! Great snippet, subtly done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Veronica.
DeleteExcellent use of the season in your piece!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kimberly.
DeleteWhat indeed...
ReplyDelete;)
DeleteWhat's in the box? What's in the box? What's in the box? I could go on, but I'll stop there. lol. Obviously, we're all dying to know!
ReplyDeleteWell, her mom is just forcing her to sneak a peek, isn't she? In the blurb, is her mom really arrested? Later it says she's dating and in love, so that threw me.
ReplyDeleteSorry for the confusion.
DeleteEveryone want to know what's in the box! I bet Abby's going to try to find out when Mom's not looking!
ReplyDeleteYou would think.
DeleteOh - you'll leave us in suspense for two weeks!
ReplyDeleteYep. :)
DeleteI'm even more curious about the contents of the box, too. Great snippet! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess.
DeleteI'm curious about the box too.
ReplyDeleteHm...Most interesting about the box...
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt!
Thanks, Alyssa.
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