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Thanks to everyone who stopped by last week and left comments. Sorry it took me so long to get to everyone. This snippet is from my Christmas story, ROMANCE REKINDLED.
To orient you: After Abby got a middle-of-the-night phone call from the police, she and her teenage daughter, Bethany, race to the jail.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited some from the original.
“Who are you?” Abby demanded of
the old man sitting in the cell next to Mother . . . and holding her mother’s hand!
Florence bounded off the cot
with the agility of a much younger woman, all those classes at the Senior
Center must be paying off, “Abigail Louise, what are you doing here?”
Abby fisted her hands on her
hips, “What are you doing in jail—and
who is that man?”
That
man
rose more slowly than Mother had—he looked to be about her age, or slightly
older, and a little taller with a head of thick, gray hair and a weathered face
that had seen a lot of sun. When he reached Mother’s side, he placed his arm
around her waist. Around her waist! How
dare he?
“Abigail, go home, I don’t want
you here. How could you drag poor Bethany out of bed at this hour of the
morning? And it’s such a nasty night with the storm coming in across the lake.”
Blurb:
Abby Ten Eyck likes her life the way it is. She runs a successful business, has a well-adjusted teenage daughter, and has managed to keep men at bay since her divorce fifteen years ago. Just before Christmas, she’s hit with change. Her mother decides to sell the family home. Then she’s arrested, with an unknown man. Could this new man in her mother’s life create more upheaval? Or could his handsome son be just what Abby needs to revive her dormant feelings?
Sam Watson embraces transition from frenetic Wall Street to a small Michigan resort town. His health is worth moving close to his dad who seems over the moon in love. But it’s the daughter of his father’s girlfriend who fascinates him. Abby Ten Eyck reminds him of his driven self. He must help her slow down before she burns out. Like he did.
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Uh oh! Her mother is in big trouble now. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLOL Mother doesn't think so. Thanks, Jess.
DeleteI'm enjoying imagining why her mother could be in jail. Could she have done something scandalous in public with her male companion?
ReplyDeleteIn answer to your question, Ed: sort of.
DeleteYou tease! Such a good story!
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Nancy.
DeleteSurprise upon surprise! I love the way you build everything up here, in the best way...excellent excerpt. Fun to revisit this story!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. High praise coming from you.
DeleteDiane, you rascal! Pile it on. I look forward to next week.
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Charmaine.
DeleteWell, mom seems in fine form, as does her male companion.
ReplyDeleteMom's a corker, all right.
DeleteLoved the excerpt! Can't wait to know more about Mom and her love interest. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen.
DeleteOooh, does Mom have secrets or what? This guy has gotten quite chummy and her daughter doesn't know him? I can't wait for more!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna. Mom has lots of secrets.
DeleteMother is being very motherly, but doing nothing to satisfy our - or Abby’s - curiousity!
ReplyDeleteMother is coming into her own.
DeleteProbably not the reaction she was expecting!
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, Abby knows her mother.
DeleteNice excerpt. You've teased our curiosity.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elaine.
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ReplyDeleteOh, what a tease! Great excerpt and her mum sounds like a bit of a character! :)
ReplyDeleteSorry. Thanks, Lyn. Yep, her mother drives Abby crazy.
DeleteAbsolutely LOVE the reversal of roles where the daughter is like 'What are you doing in jail?' and 'Who is that man with his arm around you?'
ReplyDeleteFabulous.
That's a little rude. Yeah, the mother is an adult who, I guess can take care of herself, but her daughter is worried. That should count for something!
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