Thanks to everyone who visited last week. I'm sharing snippets from The Pilot: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 1st book in a series featuring strong women on the frontier of space. Celara's ship was hailed by one claiming to be Coalition Security.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited a little from the original.
She’d taken a chance
shutting down in the middle-of-nowhere space to fix the sluggish sublight accelerator.
But there wasn’t a convenient planet—let alone a repair station—in this sector
of the Rim. Pirates zeroed in on wounded prey faster than Terran jackals.
“What if they are not
pirates?” Arjay said, “Their offer could be genuine—the ship might, indeed, be
Coalition Security.”
She grimaced, “Great minds
think alike.”
“That is rather frightening
since mine is the superior intellect.”
“Stick it in your ear, Arjay,
let’s get my baby up and running—we need to haul ass.”
“I am lodging a formal
protest—if you must record the entertainment signals emanating from a primitive
planet, please refrain from using its disgusting colloquialisms.”
“Wassamadder, Arjay, you
don’t like Terran slang?”
There's no place like home and he stole hers.
Life on the frontier of space is hard enough so when pirates stole Celara d'Enfaden's cargo, she vowed not to be tricked again. Determined to make an example out of indie pilots who disobey orders, Coalition Administrator Trevarr Jovano impounds Celara’s starship and cargo. If he backs down, he’ll lose respect. If she can’t deliver her cargo, she’ll default on her loan and lose her only home—her ship. More important than her ship, though, is her brother. To rescue him from a galactic gangster, she’ll even work with Jovano who is bent on avenging his wife’s murder.
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WOW! Your snippet is, pardon me, a killer.
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Charmaine.
DeleteReally enjoyed the snippet because the dialog is fast and snappy yet presents the dilemma of the situation they're in. I don't know whether I'd believe the new arrival is what it says it is or not! But I do want her to get out of there in one piece and SOON. Terrific excerpt...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. High praise coming from you.
DeleteI have to read this one! Perfect choice to pull this reader in. :-)
ReplyDeleteNO snippet for me this week. :-)
Thanks, Teresa. I hope you enjoyed The Pilot.
DeleteI love their banter even in this tense situation!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess.
DeleteFun dialog - slinging slang at an AI
ReplyDeleteLOL Celara does like slang.
DeleteLove the dialogue, and writing slang is always fun!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amy.
DeleteI really like her!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad, Kate. Thanks.
DeleteGreat snarky banter but I could still feel their urgency of the situation. I want to read more!
ReplyDeleteNice that she keeps her sense of humor in such a tense situation. Hope she gets out of it with everything in tact!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous card love the layout and your colouring of the image is fabulous.
ReplyDeleteThis is a nice way of working some argot into a sci fi story.
ReplyDeleteTheir dialogue back and forth is great!
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