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I'm sharing snippets from The Pilot: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 1st book in a series featuring strong women on the frontier of space. Celara's ship was hailed by one claiming to be Coalition Security. In this snippet, we're back with Trevarr and his buddy Laning as they follow Celara through an asteroid field.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited a little from the original.
Laning leaned over to look
at the comm display, “Sherd, Trev, not only did you leave the channel open, you
used the wrong one. It’s no wonder that transport fled. You heard her—she
thinks we’re pirates. Give me back my ship.”
After steadying the cruiser,
Trevarr steered out of the asteroid field then relinquished control. Was Laning right? Did the transport pilot
actually believe they were pirates? That would explain why the ship fled.
Still, it was suspicious that the pilot had not responded initially, if only to
demand proof of authority.
There's no place like home and he stole hers.
Life on the frontier of space is hard enough so when pirates stole Celara d'Enfaden's cargo, she vowed not to be tricked again.
Determined to make an example out of indie pilots who disobey orders, Coalition Administrator Trevarr Jovano impounds Celara’s starship and cargo. If he backs down, he’ll lose respect. If she can’t deliver her cargo, she’ll default on her loan and lose her only home—her ship.
More important than her ship, though, is her brother. To rescue him from a galactic gangster, she’ll even work with Jovano who is bent on avenging his wife’s murder.
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I wonder if they'll meet again so he can find out. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. They have to meet again. :)
DeleteHer suspicions will, I suspect, be resolved in time. Until then, they're great little nuggets to think and worry about.
ReplyDeleteYes, they are, Ed.
DeleteYes, I want to find out! 🤗
ReplyDeleteGood. lol
DeleteHELP!. What happens next and I'm eager to learn more.
ReplyDeleteNext week, Charmaine. I wouldn't leave you hanging without warning.
DeleteComplex and intriguing setup as always. I can't wait (even though I know what happens!).
ReplyDeleteLOL, Nancy. Thanks.
DeleteWell at least they're checking their first assumptions and re-thinking. Enjoyed the excerpt, this is a fun story unspooling! Can't wait for more...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Veronica. Next week...
DeleteI hope he can get back in touch with her. Things seem to be spinning out of control!
ReplyDeleteI've said it before and I'll say it again, this is such a good book! Their sparring, the tension building, omg. Good book!
ReplyDeleteIntriguing set up!. I'm enjoying the story.
ReplyDeleteGood thing they're rethinking their first assumptions. Something may not be right here.
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