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I'm sharing snippets from The Spy: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 4th book in my series featuring strong women on the frontier of space.
Because this is a work in progress, suggestions are greatly appreciated. The chatty transport driver has stopped at a restaurant, despite Genna's objections.
She
didn’t hold the door behind her, but when she didn’t hear the closure, she knew
he’d caught it. She told the hostess a table for one.
“Hi,
Bella,” he said to the hostess. “Your mom around?”
She
grinned at him. “Not today. Come back tomorrow, and she’ll be here.”
The
driver slung his arm around Genna’s shoulders. Since she was taller, he
let his hand slide down her back until it rested at her waist. “Table for two,
Bella.”
That was ten, now here's a little more:
“I
said one,” Genna snapped.
“Aw,
c’mon, sweetie.” He squeezed. “Don’t be mad. I told you I was sorry.”
Bella
glanced at them and hesitated.
Genna
dithered. What should she do? Twist away from his hand sliding down to
her hip and make a scene or acquiesce?
In
her hesitation, the Chellian driver said, “Table for two, Bella.”
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I always get a kick reading your snippets, my friend.
ReplyDeleteYou are such a dear, Charmaine.
DeleteThis chap has mastered the art of rolling right over people's objections and reservations.
ReplyDeleteHe sure does.
DeleteThis guy sure has a lot of nerve. I wonder what it is that he wants.
ReplyDeleteGood question, Jess.
DeleteI cannot wait to find out what this guy wants! He's just a bit too smooth to just be trying to pick her up. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLOL You are too suspicious, Jenna.
DeleteOOOh - I hope she stomps on him.
ReplyDeleteTweeted.
LOL Thanks, Daryl.
DeleteThis guy is extremely creepy! He'd better have a darned good excuse, or get a serious come-uppance!
ReplyDeleteLOL Good observation, Ian.
DeleteI have to admit I'm not sure why she's putting up with him. He seems to have hijacked her mission before she even got started.
ReplyDeleteGood question, Alexis.
DeleteI think it's going to be a table for two LOL. Enjoying the story, still have my theory of what's going on here and can't wait to read more! Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteLOL He just rolls right over her.
DeleteTable for two it is. lol Enjoying these snippets.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen.
DeleteHe doesn't give up, does he? I still hope he's one of the good guys.
ReplyDeleteNo, he doesn't. LOL
DeleteYou are writing him as such a smooth character. I swear I can picture him! lol
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa.
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