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Thanks to everyone who visited last week. Your support and comments always give me new ideas. I'm sharing snippets from The Spy: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 4th book in my series featuring strong women on the frontier of space.
Because this is a work in progress, suggestions are greatly appreciated. Genna is at headquarters meeting with the Commissioner of the Clandestine Sector of Coalition of Planets Intelligence. The Commissioner speaks first.
“How
do you know all this—you haven’t been out on the Rim for two years.”
“I
have friends out there, friends in Security Forces, and I keep tabs on what’s
happening there, in the event I ever go back.”
The
commissioner tapped his upper lip, “I have a mission for you, in Malcor
Sector.”
Relief
rushed through her—she did have a
job.
He
stroked his chin, “Didn’t you serve under Commander Servary on Vesteron Colony?”
She
tightened her jaw—the mention of his name brought an ache to her heart, then seeing
him today when he didn’t recognize her had transformed that ache into anguish. Controlling
her features, she forced herself not to reveal her feelings.
Oblivious,
Vorinda went on, “Servary cleaned up the mess his predecessor left behind when
he retired—too bad he isn’t still with Security. Weren’t you and he . . . close
at one time?”
Helpless
to prevent the heat that crept up her neck and into her cheeks, she said, “Yes,
sir.”
Tentative blurb:
Rookie agent must rescue veteran before his cover is blown.
Genna Nogaro, new to the Coalition of Planets’ Intelligence Commission, is assigned to bring in an undercover operative in Hallart’s organization. More experienced agents died before getting him out. Were they killed by the intergalactic gangster or has the operative gone rogue?
Quintall d’Sernin, con man extraordinaire, infiltrated the mob and moved up to be the gangster’s right-hand man. Hallart has his tentacles throughout the Coalition—business, industry, and government. Quin’s finally worked himself into a valued position. All he needs is the key to mob structure in order for Coalition forces to take down the entire organization.
Genna will pose as a new recruit to distract Hallart long enough for Quin to find the key. If they work together, they can accomplish more. But Quin and Genna’s lives are jeopardized by a mole in the Intelligence Commission. Will their true roles be revealed before they accomplish their goal?
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