Each weekend, the Weekend Writing Warriors share an 8 - 10 sentence snippet. Be sure to visit the other authors. You can find them here.
I'm sharing snippets from The Spy: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 4th book in my series featuring strong women on the frontier of space.
Because this is a work in progress, suggestions are greatly appreciated. Because of your comments last week, I added this next section. By the way, I also changed the last sentence, which read: “TAM-247765, you are next in line for liftoff.”
“TAM-247765,
you are tenth in line to depart,” Space Flight Control informed her, along with
admonitions that even a newbie pilot knew.
Genna
shoved thoughts of the Chellian driver and her former boss out of her mind. She
had a mission. Excitement filled her, as it had in the commissioner’s office.
Her first mission. Find Quin d’Sernin.
And
bring him in.
Along
with the excitement came fear. Would she have to infiltrate Hallart’s gang? Did
she dare?
That was the snippet. Here's a bit more:
Maybe
she could find d’Sernin without encountering Hallart. She drummed her fingers
on the control panel.
“TAM-247765,
you are second in line to depart,” Space Flight Control announced. “Make your
way to the liftoff ring.”
Genna
taxied to the ring. Within mins, gravity slammed her back into her seat. The five-point
safety harness kept her from being thrown around the cockpit while blasting
through Bricaldia’s atmosphere. Tamerly’s ship handled the bumpy ride with little
jarring.





