Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors, where writers share snippets from their work-in-progress or new release. Apologies for missing last week. My computer died (or so I thought) last Saturday, and since I'm a confirmed procrastinator, I couldn't put up my post. Turns out I'd plugged in the wrong charger cord. No wonder my batter didn't charge. Glad it was only that instead of needing a new computer. Anyway, on to my post for this week.
I'm sharing snippets from the 4th Alex O'Hara cozy mystery, The Case of the Wedding Wrecker. This snippet picks up where we left off last time. (BTW, thanks for all your comments, esp. those about Alex running her mouth.) The police chief, Dan Hoesen, is interviewing Alex. The lawyer, Hans Bogardus, is with her. The last line was: What happened after you got dressed for the rehearsal."
Snippet:
“Nick and I went to the church. After the
rehearsal, we had dinner at the Golden Fleece.” The chef at the popular
restaurant was a friend of Nick’s.
“And then?” Dan prodded.
“Maria, Nick’s mother, hustled me out to a
limo, where my best friends were waiting.”
“Who?”
“Dottie, Ellen—”
Dan tore off a sheet of paper from his pad
and shoved it across the table to me along with a pen. “Write down their
names—first and last. And where you went.”
And a little more:
I did as instructed, before pushing the paper
back to him.
Dan glanced at it. “Did Nick go with you?”
I shook my head. “Our party was Girls Only.” I grinned thinking about Nick coming along. Until it hit me. Nick was in
jail. I sobered quickly.
“What time did you leave the restaurant?”
“Seven? Or a little after. Maria would
know. Do you want me to get her?” I started to rise, but Hans drew me down with
a hand on my wrist.
“I will talk to her later,” Dan said. “What
did Nick do?”
“I assume he went to his bachelor party.”
Hans tapped the table next to my arm. “Only
speak to the things you know. Don’t assume or guess.”
The chief glared at him. “When did you
return to your apartment?”
“Eleven forty-five.”
“You know that exactly?”
I grimaced. “Yes. Maria made a point of
telling me to tell Nick to drive her home because the limo and driver were done
at midnight.”
“Nick was in the apartment when you
returned?”
“Yes. We talked for—”
Hans tapped my forearm. “Remember what I
said. Only answer the questions. Don’t volunteer any more information than what
the chief asks.”
Dan pursed his lips. “Is that really
necessary, Counselor? She isn’t accused. I’m just trying to find out where
Palzetti was.”
Hans didn’t say anything, just stared at
Dan. That look. OMG, I’m glad it wasn’t directed at me. His dad might be
elegance personified. Hans looked like a shark, white teeth and all.
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