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Apologies for being AWOL for the past 2 weeks. Life got in the way. Today, I'm sharing a snippet from my romantic suspense, ONE RED SHOE. In August, I received the rights back from the publisher, and I'll be reissuing it next week. This snippet is how the story begins.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited some from the original.
“Daria Jean,
you are not going to New York City and that’s final.”
With a thudding
heart and sweaty palms, Daria Mason zipped shut her suitcase and gritted her
teeth, “Jimmy, we’ve been over this before.”
Only about
twenty times.
She lifted the
suitcase off her twin bed, and since Jimmy blocked the doorway, the other boys
who crowded behind him in the hall couldn’t rush in—either to help or hinder.
It was a sign of Jimmy’s discombobulation that he didn’t march in and grab the
suitcase out of her hands.
She took one
last look around her bedroom for anything she might have forgotten. In that
fleeting moment, she realized her room looked faded and worn. With the
exception of her computer desk where the doll’s house her father built used to
be, the room looked exactly the way it had on her thirteenth birthday. Same
twin bed, same wallpaper and curtains she and her mother had chosen for that
landmark birthday. No wonder the boys still treated her like she was thirteen
instead of six months shy of the Big Three-Oh.
Wannabe writer rescues wounded spy while
risking her heart.
Daria
Mason’s life is too predictable. Nothing ever happens in her small Iowa town
where everybody knows everybody else. But when she travels to New York City
looking for a little excitement, she never expects to bring home a wounded spy.
From
the moment agent Sam Jozwiak steals intel vital to US security from a Russian
Mafia kingpin, Murphy’s Law takes over. No matter how he covers his tracks, the
kingpin’s assassins find him. What’s worse than getting shot in the butt?
Accepting help from an Iowa tourist.
Sam
and Daria flee cross country with the assassins right behind them. Sharing
danger and excitement—and a few kisses—with Sam soon has Daria convinced he’s
the man for her. He thinks she’ll be better off once he’s out of her life for
good. With their lives on the line, can she convince him they belong together?
I assume she'll get away without them stopping her. But what then? You've got me wondering.
ReplyDeleteGood. Thanks, Ed.
DeleteI love her determination! A great beginning to this story!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess.
DeleteIt certainly does sound as if it's time for her to make changes! Loved the descriptions and the insights they provided, great snippet! I hope the re-release does well...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. I'm glad all that comes across.
DeleteAnd the story goes round and round. Always fascinating, Diane.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Charmaine.
DeleteYes - she's a little too old to be stopped by a bossy brother.
ReplyDeleteAs the reader gets to know her, it becomes clearer why it's taken so long.
DeleteCongrats on getting the rights back and good luck with the rerelease!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. The pub was very gracious about it.
DeleteThis sure makes me curious about her life up to this point and what's spurred her to make the change.
ReplyDeleteGood. That's what I'm hoping for. As the story unfolds, it will become more obvious.
DeleteGet out of that time warp, girlfriend!! LOVE this story!!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Remember when we rode the subway in NYC at night! Just for my research. You guys were great.
DeleteHa! You got me. I never expected that last line. I thought she might be 18 or so. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa.
DeleteWho are these boys? Does she run a boys school? Orphanage? Are they hers? Great snippet that leaves me wanting more!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna. Exactly what I want. :)
DeleteGreat start to the story - raising plenty of questions in the readers' minds. Good luck with you re-release of this book Diane.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lyn.
DeleteGo to NYC, girl! Don't let them stop you!
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't let them. Thanks, Amy.
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