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I'm sharing snippets from The Pilot: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 1st book in a series featuring strong women on the frontier of space. When Celara's ship is hailed by one claiming to be Coalition Security, she gives them the slip in an asteroid field. In this snippet, she's landed at Vesteron Colony to deliver her cargo and sees a mechanic bent over an engine. The last sentence was: As she stared at his butt, all she could think was oh, mama.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited a little from the original.
Celara hoped he was human and
the rest of him lived up to the preview—better yet, she hoped he was in a party
mood. After escaping from the pirates, she wanted to howl . . . and someone
to howl with.
“Hey, big boy,” she called
to the mechanic, “Wanna party?”
“Yo, d’Enfaden,” a pilot
hollered, “How come you never ask me to party?”
“You space jocks will party
all night then stick me with the bill,” she shot back before approaching the
mechanic, “You there, working on the Agilean—that is one fine ship.”
When he turned around, she
sucked in a breath, Oh, yeah, a
primal part of her sat up and took notice. His backside, gorgeous as it was,
didn’t compare to the rest of him—the broad shoulders and muscles of a laborer
plus the black hair, square jaw and blade-straight nose of Bricaldian
aristocracy—what a delicious combination.
He tossed aside the rag on
which he’d wiped his hands, then he raised his arms to slip them into the work
uniform, and she noticed a fading red scar near the bottom of his ribcage.
Knife fight . . . he was lucky the wound hadn’t been deeper or higher.
There's no place like home, and he stole hers.
Life on the frontier of space is hard enough so when pirates stole Celara d'Enfaden's cargo, she vowed not to be tricked again.
Determined to make an example out of indie pilots who disobey orders, Coalition Administrator Trevarr Jovano impounds Celara’s starship and cargo. If he backs down, he’ll lose respect. If she can’t deliver her cargo, she’ll default on her loan and lose her only home—her ship.
More important than her ship, though, is her brother. To rescue him from a galactic gangster, she’ll even work with Jovano who is bent on avenging his wife’s murder.
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Looks like she likes what she sees, hopefully he'll say yes.
ReplyDeleteMay this be the beginning of great things.
ReplyDeleteHmmm, want to know more, what dark secrets might lie beneath this almost perfect exterior!
ReplyDeleteShe's certainly observing him acutely. Handsome with knife scars - intriguing - but is he in the mood to party?
ReplyDeleteDIANE, YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL WAY OF EXPRESSING YOURSELF.
ReplyDeleteShe's certainly bold about this idea...why do I have a feeling things may not go the way she has planned? Fun snippet today...
ReplyDeleteGlad he had just as much going for him from the front as the back. :D
ReplyDeleteInteresting mechanic. Definitely an attention grabber.
ReplyDeleteOh, Diane, I am laughing, thinking about how wrong she is about him. I want to warn her!! lol
ReplyDeleteDelicious combination, indeed. ;)
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