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I'm back again with another snippet from my romantic suspense, One Red Shoe. In last week's snippet, Sam was ambushed by a Russian Mafia kingpin's security. He got away and today we catch up with him in New York City.
Teller
was late, and Sam Jozwiak was freezing his ass off—one more screw-up in one
hell of a long line of screw-ups. Sam’s light jacket had been fine for April in Paris, but
spring warmth was nonexistent on the deserted fifth floor of the old Guttschenheimer
Department Store. After running for three days across Europe, he had to keep
moving, if only to stay awake. When he heard the heavy footsteps, he stayed
hidden in the rabbit warren of inventory shelving to make sure it was Teller.
“We
know you are here, Samuel,” announced Yuri Grashenko, accompanied by his buddy the
Hulk—damn, they found him again.
Sam had
to ditch his weapon at Charles de Gaulle because the airlines were finicky
about people carrying guns aboard—Sam was pretty finicky,
too, about passengers being armed . . . unless it was him. Someone from the
agency should have passed him along the JFK concourse and handed off a gun, but
Teller probably didn’t think about that.
“Do
not make things hard on yourself, Samuel, give me what I seek and we shall go
our separate ways—as we have before.”
If Sam
believed that, Santa existed and pigs could fly.
It Happened One Night meets Knight and Day.
When elementary teacher Daria Mason left Iowa for a writers’ conference in New York City, she didn’t expect to come home with a wounded spy. Sam Jozwiak works for a shadow agency that gathers intel vital to U.S. security. From the moment he steals digital files from a Russian Mafia kingpin, Murphy’s Law takes over. No matter how he covers his tracks, the kingpin’s assassins find him. What’s worse than getting shot in the butt? Accepting help from an Iowa tourist. Thus, begins a road trip that takes Sam and Daria cross country with the assassins right behind them.
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I love Sam's sarcasm in this snippet! I hope he finds a way out.
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Jess.
DeleteHe's so calm in the face of this! No weapon, up the creek for sure. :-)
ReplyDeletebtw, I LOVED Knight and Day. I'm not a big Cruise fan, but his acting was outstanding. He and Cameron Diaz had fantastic chemistry.
I totally agree about Cruise. I love his movies and this one is great.
DeleteI wonder if this is leading up to the moment when Sam gets wounded.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next week, Ed.
DeleteGood detail and pacing. The details are nicely balanced with the action.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Cara. I cut so much (of the real story) to make it fit in the allotted length.
DeleteOh, I DO love Sam!! What a fun book!
ReplyDeleteI love all my books, but this one is special. Maybe it's because I worked on it so long.
DeleteI'm with Sam - those promises aren't to be believed. Really a dramatic story you have going on here, enjoyed the snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica.
DeleteEnjoying your inner dialogue, Diane. Sam has it right, though. No time to be playing with fire!
ReplyDeleteThank, Kim.
DeleteClassic banter. Fun!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Aurora.
DeleteGood scene with all the inner dialogue. He's in big trouble now. Nice writing.
ReplyDeleteHe is in more trouble than ever. Thanks, Charmaine.
DeleteWhat a tough place to be. Can't wait to see what comes next!
ReplyDeleteAlways glad to hear that, Christina.
DeleteNow that is a tight spot. I'd probably stay hidden and at least make them work for the pleasure of my company. :)
ReplyDeleteLOL, Gem. Even though they keep missing him, one of these days...
DeleteIt sounds as though this will be an interesting read. I wonder how they manage to track him down so easily?
ReplyDeleteGood question.
DeleteAh, the old days, when you could actually carry things onto planes. :p You give a lot of personality in this snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kimberly.
DeleteBetween a rock and a hard place. Good tension.
ReplyDeleteYep. Thanks.
DeleteHope Sam can think fast on his feet––I wouldn't want to be confronted by a guy named Hulk. ;)
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