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My snippet is from my upcoming release, THE CASE OF THE MEDDLING MAMA, an Alex O'Hara Novel, third in my PI mystery series. Apologies for the creative punctuation, which was done to keep within the sentence limit. The "reluctant" shopper who met Alex at the dress shop and blindsided by her friend into getting Alex to check out her new boyfriend, has shown up for an appointment.
“So nice to see you again, Ginnie,”
I said, shaking her cold and shaky hand.
As she sat, I walked around the big
mahogany desk that dominated the office and settled in the black ergonomic
chair. From beneath my partially-closed eyelids, I saw a hint
of apprehension swimming in her eyes—needing to put her at ease, I said, “Did
you find a dress at Ellie’s?”
“Oh, yes,” she said, surprised at
my question, “I always find something there, she carries fantastic clothes.”
I laughed, “At equally fantastic
prices.” Time to find out what she wanted. “I wish Ellie had come to me before
she met all those losers—she’s happy now, and that’s all that counts,
so what can I do for you?”
She cleared her throat, looked down
at her hands then up at me before saying, “What you did for Ellen, keep me from
making a big mistake.”
After she told me what she knew about
Karl Trimmer, I asked if she’d met his mother.
She made a face. “I’d rather not
talk about that.”
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Oh, I wonder what happened when she met his mother. Very intriguing! I look forward to reading this! All the best with your upcoming release! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. I hope you enjoy it.
DeleteHm, I wonder what Alex is going to learn and why Ginnie is so worried? Interesting!
ReplyDeleteSo glad I have you guessing.
DeleteIt's always the problem with the mother. Nice snippet with a nifty setting.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Charmaine.
DeleteThis sounds like an interesting case. Wonder what exactly Ginnie wants.
ReplyDeleteDoes she want Alex's reassurance that Karl is a good guy? Or something else.
DeleteIs she making a match?
ReplyDeleteGinnie already found Karl online. But is he who he says he is?
DeleteEnjoyed the snippet. I liked the way she put her new client at ease enough to share the real details. Terrific!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica.
DeleteDon't be giving all Moms the bad rap! I like how Alex handles her client, playing good cop . . . for the moment.
ReplyDeleteNah, not all Mamas are bad. LOL Says one mama to another. Thanks, Nancy.
DeleteThat last line tells a story all by itself! Makes me wonder what that story is. :)
ReplyDeleteAlex will just have to find out. (So will the reader. hehehe)
DeleteYou've got me wondering what she'd rather not talk about.
ReplyDeleteNot trying to be cruel, Ed, but you'll have to wait and see.
DeleteIs it wrong that I kinda hope she talks about it? I'm curious!
ReplyDeleteCuriosity is good. :)
DeleteHmm, so who is Karl Trimmer? His mother sounds like a nightmare. I cannot wait to find out more!
ReplyDeleteKarl is Ginnie's boyfriend. The one she hired Alex to check out. What she does find out is interesting.
DeleteHmm, so who is Karl Trimmer? His mother sounds like a nightmare. I cannot wait to find out more!
ReplyDeleteHUm, I wonder what the relationship with the mother was. Congrats on the release!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elizabeth.
DeleteGreat snippet! Congratulations on your new release!
ReplyDeleteI'm intrigued to know more. What's up with the mother?
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