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My snippet is from my newly-released The Case of the Meddling Mama an Alex O'Hara Novel, third in my PI mystery series. Apologies for the creative punctuation, which was done to keep within the sentence limit.
From Ginnie, I learned the
following about Karl Trimmer: thirty-two, computer programming consultant, worked
at home—in a new condo in Country Club Estates, a new development north along
the lakeshore.
“Where did he live before that—an
apartment?”
“No, he lived at home.”
Although I was surprised, I had to
remember how bad the economy had been a few years ago—a lot of people fresh out
of college or who’d lost jobs moved home.
“I wondered about that, too,” Ginnie
tapped her short, no polish nails on the chair arm, “His mother has health
issues, and since Karl’s an only child, he took care of her.”
“And what changed that he moved out—did
she die, or move into a nursing home?”
“Oh, nothing like that, he hired a
homecare worker to stay with her during the day--his mother can get around with
a walker, and Karl got her one of those medical alert necklaces, so she can
call for help if she needs it.”
“Are you concerned about her
disability?”
“Maybe a little, she’s only
fifty-two and I don’t understand her illness, but Karl said it can be debilitating,
and . . .”
The Case of the Meddling Mama released last Monday. It's available at:
This is the last snippet from The Case of the Meddling Mama. Next week I'll introduce a new story. Be sure to check out the other WeWriWa authors.
Sounds pretty reasonable, but I guess it's Alex's job to find out if it really is.
ReplyDeleteIntuition or "something" makes Alex dig deeper. What she turns up is often a surprise.
DeleteSounds like Karl has a lot on his plate with his mother. I wonder if Ginnie's met her, or only knows what she's heard from him. Always intriguing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. Boys and their mothers...
DeleteVery interesting. A son must take care of Mom and where does that leave her?
ReplyDeleteGood point, Charmaine.
DeleteInteresting background details, gives us quite a picture. Enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. And that's just the beginning. Alex always takes what a client says with a grain of salt.
DeleteSounds like Karl's come up financially in the past few years. I'm wondering if that should be a point of concern. And what is his mother's health concern? Could be more to him than meets the eye!
ReplyDeleteGood points, Jenna.
DeleteA concerned and caring son. Karl just went up in my books!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kimberly.
DeleteInteresting - a hint his mother might not really have a health problem, or Ginnie doesn't quite believe she does.
ReplyDeleteThat's what Alex needs to find out. And if the client doesn't always tell the truth or leaves out something...
DeleteA lot of red flags here. Lol. I'm reading your book now. Just got started!
ReplyDeleteI hope you enjoy it, Cara. Red flags or herrings??? LOL
DeleteI love this series. I haven't read this one yet, but it's on my list!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Kara. You just made my day!
DeleteI enjoyed how you presented the information on his background. It could be taken in more than one way, which make him more of a mystery.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ed. Glad you saw that.
DeleteLots of information here that may, or may not, be relevant to the remainder of the book. You are building an excellent picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Rachel.
DeleteKarl sounds busy.
ReplyDeleteYep. He has a lot on his plate.
DeleteIt was nice of him to take care of his mother. Great background on his character!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Caitlin. Alex has to start with what the client tells her, then she starts digging.
DeleteSounds like another great one. Congrats on the new release1
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Marissa.
DeleteI was thinking his mother was in her eighties. She's only fifty-two? Makes me wonder what her illness is.
ReplyDeleteGood question. ;)
DeleteGreat dialogue!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...we have a mystery illness now to thicken the plot... Good hook, Diane!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa. Gotta keep the reader guessing.
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