Thanks to everyone who visited last week. I'm sharing snippets from The Pilot: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 1st book in a series featuring strong women on the frontier of space. Celara's ship was hailed by one claiming to be Coalition Security.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited a little from the original.
While the Volpian cruiser
steadily advanced, the accelerator hiccupped before engaging.
“You have full power,” Arjay announced with satisfaction.
The pirate ship moved in
closer, aligning its docking port with hers.
“Hang onto your hat,” Celara spiraled the agile Thermopylae under
the belly of the cruiser, and her stomach took five secs to catch up.
His complexion, a shade
darker than her fair one, turned a sickly shade of green, “You must give
advanced notice before attempting to evade a ship intent on docking.”
With a laugh, she goosed the
sublight accelerator past standard limit, “Who said anything about attempting to evade?”
“You do not seriously think
you can outrun a Volpian cruiser? Rega d’Enfaden, that ship can achieve speed
three times faster—”
The engine protested the
abuse she inflicted but did not falter. The cruiser would certainly win a
long-distance race with her small transport, but not a sprint. A little more
time and she’d be home free.
There's no place like home and he stole hers.
Life on the frontier of space is hard enough so when pirates stole Celara d'Enfaden's cargo, she vowed not to be tricked again. Determined to make an example out of indie pilots who disobey orders, Coalition Administrator Trevarr Jovano impounds Celara’s starship and cargo. If he backs down, he’ll lose respect. If she can’t deliver her cargo, she’ll default on her loan and lose her only home—her ship. More important than her ship, though, is her brother. To rescue him from a galactic gangster, she’ll even work with Jovano who is bent on avenging his wife’s murder.
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ReplyDeleteCharmaine, you are so kind.
DeleteI can imagine her wicked laugh as she pulls away from the pirate.
ReplyDeleteGreat!
DeleteI'm imagining the Millennium Falcon making a run for it! Nice action snippet!
ReplyDeleteThat was my image when I was writing this scene. Thanks, Jenna.
DeleteI admire her panache and confidence! Very dramatic snippet, easy to visualize the maneuver the way you've described it all happening...whee!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Veronica. Love that word "panache."
DeleteShe's certainly determined to try and escape.
ReplyDeleteThat she is, Aurora.
DeleteYikes! I hope she makes it! After running, I don't think she would fare well at all.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jess. She'd really be in deep trouble if she's caught.
DeleteGreat action. I'm hoping she can pull it off and escape.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen. We'll see.
DeleteI already love her spunk! Nice snippet, Diane. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa. Not sure Celara would like being call spunky, though. :)
DeleteI love her determination and spunk. Nice, action-packed snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Natalie.
DeleteShe's calmer than I am. I'd been running circles screaming.
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Thanks for tweeting, Daryl. Yeah, I'd probably be screaming, too.
DeleteThat was fun. Loved the tummy drop description.
ReplyDeleteThanks, dolorah. When I reread that, I was surprised it sounded so good. I guess we can be amazing at times. :)
DeleteShe believes in herself. I like that.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elaine.
DeleteLove the premise of this series, Diane! Great action-packed scene here! :)
ReplyDeleteGutsy lady! Love it!
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