Thanks to everyone who visited last week. I'm sharing snippets from The Pilot: An Outer Rim Novel. It's the 1st book in a series featuring strong women on the frontier of space. Celara's ship was hailed by one claiming to be Coalition Security. This week, we're switching to the other ship.
Please excuse the creative punctuation, necessary to keep this within the guidelines. It's also edited a little from the original.
“Come on, Trev, you’re not
going into that asteroid field, are you?”
Trevarr Jovano leaned
forward in the pilot’s chair, alert for debris. He and his friend, Laning
Servary, had been on a shake-down cruise for Laning’s new ship. When Trevarr had
offered him the position of Chief Security Officer of Malcon Sector, he’d thrown
in a newer, faster ship as incentive. He’d taken the controls from his friend a short time
before sighting what he thought was a disabled cargo transport. With the
way that vessel was fleeing, Trevarr was certain the pilot had something to
hide.
He gave his friend a
calculated smile, “He dares me to follow.”
Laning chuckled, “You never
could resist a challenge.”
Trevarr did not ease off the
accelerator of the Volpian cruiser. He just grinned.
There's no place like home and he stole hers.
Life on the frontier of space is hard enough so when pirates stole Celara d'Enfaden's cargo, she vowed not to be tricked again.
Determined to make an example out of indie pilots who disobey orders, Coalition Administrator Trevarr Jovano impounds Celara’s starship and cargo. If he backs down, he’ll lose respect. If she can’t deliver her cargo, she’ll default on her loan and lose her only home—her ship.
More important than her ship, though, is her brother. To rescue him from a galactic gangster, she’ll even work with Jovano who is bent on avenging his wife’s murder.
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Always exciting, Diane. I'm excited as I read your snippets.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad, Charmaine. Thanks for telling me.
DeleteGreat snippet! They're both assuming incorrect information about who is in the other ship.
ReplyDeleteYep. A comedy of errors, if it wasn't so dangerous.
DeleteUh oh, clearly they have to take this 'dare' - love the way you're setting up the situation and showing us both sides...terrific snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Veronica.
DeleteI see there are devil pilots on both ships. they'll collide in more than one way!
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Aurora.
DeleteUh, oh. They might be a little too much alike! Fun snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alexis.
DeleteYay! I love those last two lines of dialogue. It always makes me want to read more!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Amy. Love reading that.
DeleteI wonder if these two pilots actually know one another. If they don't, boy, is this going to be a meeting of the minds! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Jenna. Maybe, maybe not.
DeleteWow! Looks like we have cowboys on both ends of this chase. lol Nice character building, Diane. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Teresa.
DeleteTwo young guys, gunning the accelerator of their hot rod . . .
ReplyDeleteExactly. Thanks, Ed, for that visual.
DeleteGreat banter! Can't wait for the chase. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Karen.
DeleteTrevarr seems like a "never a dull moment" kind of guy.
ReplyDeleteLOL Actually, he's rather staid--until he got together with Laning.
DeleteThanks for these book introductions, Diane 🌹
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