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I'm sharing snippets from the 4th Alex O'Hara cozy mystery, The Case of the Wedding Wrecker. This follows immediately after last week's snippet. Police deputy Dawson (aka Deputy Dawg, Alex's nemesis since 2nd grade) interrupted the wedding ceremony by arresting Nick for the murder Mike Amerson, Todd's stepfather.
Snippet:
Chief Hoesen
grabbed the deputy’s arm. “You idiot. You should’ve made sure the boy heard
first.”
“B-But—”
“We will sort
this out at the station.” The chief looked at all of us crowded in front of the
altar and gave us an apologetic shrug.
As Deputy
Dawson led my bridegroom away, in cuffs, Tony and Maria hustled right
behind them.
Dottie’s little
girl tore away from her grandmother. Sobbing, Emmy
dodged legs, shoving me aside, as she tried to get to her mother. The boys, apparently thinking their
sister had the right idea, charged the altar.
And a little more:
When the best man moved
to take care of his family, Todd stood frozen, his face pale. Poor kid. I grabbed his hand.
“Let’s go," I
said. “Pop, take care of things here.”
Clinging to
Todd, our sort-of adopted teen, I hitched up my gown and dashed after Nick and
the others.
“M-Mike is
dead?” The kid appeared stunned. I couldn’t blame him. “Mr. Nick killed him?”
“He couldn’t
have. I’m sure there’s some mistake.”
As we bolted down the aisle, I heard Pop talking. “Listen, folks, there has to be an explanation.
Why don’t you all head on over to the Grand Hotel for the reception? No need to
waste all that food. Jim, Dottie, take over.”
Outside, I
spied the limo in the parking lot off to the side of the church. “C’mon, Todd.”
With my skirt
hiked up to my knees, I clutched Todd’s hand and raced down the steps. Sure
enough, I tripped on the last step. Todd saved me from a face plant. We were halfway to the limo when Pop came running
out of the church, heavily panting.
The driver hopped
out of the car. “That was fast. This is your groom? Kinda young, isn’t he?”
Todd jerked open
the back door of the limo before the driver could come around.
I gathered my skirt and tried to enter the car. I hollered at Todd to help me. After shoving yards of satin—damn train—off the seat, he clambered in beside me.
“Wait for me,”
Pop yelled.
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LOL - The vision of trying to get all that dress into the limo - love it.
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Thanks, Daryl.
DeleteWow, what a disaster! Even the arrest. But through it all, Alex has maintained her composure and seems very determined to get the full story. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteSort of. Disaster is right. I guess I haven't shared her feelings of confusion and anger, despite her determination.
DeleteQuite an action scene!
ReplyDeleteOh, good. Thanks, Aurora.
DeleteDefinitely a wedding day to remember! And this must be a very awkward limo ride. Great snippet! Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteLOL Yep, a wedding to remember.
DeleteTHAT is definitely one wrecked wedding!
ReplyDeleteI had to smile at the limo driver's comment about Todd's age.
No pressure, Diane, but write faster! lol
Thanks, Teresa. I'm trying.
DeleteThis is all SO dramatic - wow! Really enjoying the story and this was another terrific snippet.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Veronica.
DeleteHa. Even I could feel her struggling in the dress... whew!!
ReplyDeleteLOL Thanks, Jeff.
DeleteThat's what I'd call dramatic! Poor girl.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Elaine.
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